Jordyn gave me the best advice on the explainations because it helped me connect and explain what I was talking about better than before. In my revisions instead of simply saying this is one thing an individual may focus on, I provide an explaination of what that word in real life may look like. For example, collaboration is internal connections with coworkers and external partnerships with other businesses. Rather than saying, collaboration is collaborating with coworkers and other businesses.
“We know only too well that what we are doing is nothing more than a drop in the ocean. But if the drop were not there, the ocean would be missing something.” ― Mother Teresa
