Rework Project Description and Methods to ensure different topics are not bleeding into other goals and objectives and that they are all separate things.
I think another thing that we need to decide on is if we want to actually do community gardens because we talked about it at the beginning but I feel like it has gotten lost throughout the different parts of the proposal. Kind of going along with that there are some other things that we need to make sure are throughout like moving the wild seed project mentioned to the methods because we mention it in the project description.
I think it may be useful if we include info on the already established compost initiative the organization is already doing with Mr. Fox throughout our proposal.
We need to get the educational and awareness perspective brought out more.
